Our Proposal
In my documentary I will discuss the nature of the youth and why they get so offended with subjects such as Feminism, Racism and sexism. I will find out opinions from the public by going round and discussing with them what their thoughts are. Also to ask them about these subjects and why it would be so serious at this time. My aim is to find out why the current generation is referred to a the 'Cotton Wool' generation and why its so hard for people to speak out about there opinions without them being attacked by others claiming it to be 'Racist' or 'Sexist'.
Our Roles
Presenter- Jordan
Editing- Jordan and Lucas
Cameraman- Charlie and Connor
Lighting and Props- Lucas
Producer- Charlie
Sound- Connor
Location Scout - Charlie, Lucas and Connor
Editing- Jordan and Lucas
Cameraman- Charlie and Connor
Lighting and Props- Lucas
Producer- Charlie
Sound- Connor
Location Scout - Charlie, Lucas and Connor
Our Pitch
"As a group you seem to really understand what your production is about and the angle that you are going to take when producing it.
You delivery was fairly confident with Jordan and Charlie taking the lead with question answering. The questions were answered very well and demonstrated that you have given a lot of consideration to your ideas. You could have used examples of the topic of your production – you could have started by maybe trying to incite a reaction with the class, in a similar way to how you will during interviews. This would have reinforced how some are more easily offended that others and would have given a greater understanding of what the content of your documentary will be like. A more visual approach would be better. Your PowerPoint was relatively bland and didn’t inspire – but you kept it lighter on the text which was good. None of you were reliant on reading from the board which is excellent. Overall it was a good pitch." Adam Jones, 2017* |
As a whole I thought that our first pitch went very well as we didn't depend on the board and all of us knew what we needed to say as well as the group was confident in presenting the pitch. There are a few things I feel like we could have done better; as a group we could have made our PowerPoint more visually appealing with having more images placed around the presentation. We could of also interacted with the rest of the class by asking them the types of questions that we will be asking to our interviewee. Personally I would of liked to have more information to provide however as I went 2nd last, I feel a alot had already been covered. However as a whole for our first pitch I think it was successful the group presented the pitch well and with confidence.
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